(Yes I photo shopped the above photo to make it look like Oberstar is holding a letter)
Steve Anderson
1894 Legendary Lane
Awesomeville, MN 56789
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April 28, 2009
Congressman James L. Oberstar
Duluth Federal Building
Room 231
Duluth, Minnesota 55802
Dear Congressman Oberstar,
I am writing you today in regards to H.R. Bill 1931, 'The Juvenile Crime Reduction Act', which aims to improve the treatment of juveniles with mental health or substance abuse disorders by establishing new grant programs for increased training, technical assistance, and coordination of service providers, and for other purposes.
I feel that 'The Juvenile Crime Reduction Act' would greatly improve society. If juveniles are treated better while in a facility, meaning rehabilitating the juveniles so they are able to go back into society, everyone would benefit. The juveniles would be able to live a normal life, the families of the juveniles would get their kid's back, and the rest of society would gain more members.
Another set of people who would benefit from this Bill being passed would be the employees at the facility. With the increased training they would receive, they would acquire new skills that will help them with jobs throughout their life.
Your support of Bill HR 1931 would help ensure that the juveniles and employees at the mental health facilities would have a better life. So to support these people, I urge you to vote YES on Bill HR 1931: The Juvenile Crime Reduction Act.
Should you need any other information, feel free to contact me at 1-800-AWE-SOME (293-7663). Thank you very much for your time. Have a good day.
Sincerely,
Steven A.
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Hey Steve-
ReplyDeleteI loved the photo shop job!! Very creative.. I also liked the Awesomeville town you came up with.. That would be a neat town! you're too funny! I think that you covered everything rather well. Keep up the good work!
Haha Steve this was AWESOME!
ReplyDeleteSo funny with the Photoshop job, I barely noticed it!
It was a good move on your part to not only say one group of people who benefit, but ALL of the people who will benefit. State representatives are really concerned about their voters and if employees of any job/facility knew that their representative supported a bill to help them with their jobs, it would be very effective!!
Great letter!
Kathy
Haha, nice work photo shopping that picture! I think you did a good job on this letter! Especially how you said it would benefit everyone not just the target audience. Lastly, I'll be saving that number under Awesome Steve;) Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteFirst of all, great photoshopping to make it look like Oberstar is holding a letter, hilar! I like how you chose a topic that noone else really chose so it's cool to read something different. I like how you said that this will benefit everyone, which I agree that it will! Great job steve!
haha..steve LOVE the pic!! I agree with you I think that passing this bill would benefit everyone!! Good topic..and good letter!!:)
ReplyDeleteVery nice and wonderful article. Thank you.
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